IamNoOneSpecial1's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jacko Challenge Pose with my OC]

Hi there, I saw your post in the forums... so I got here to take a look at your artworks...

For this one... okay, one simple tip to make your shadows better: Don't shade using grey... UNLESS your entire artwork is a grey monochrome.

2) For the hair... the way you tried to shade her hair... clashes with the overall art style. The overall art style is simplistic... so you must also shade in a simplistic way: Cel Shading.

3) Make the colors and lining of the background duller... that's why it's called background: it doesn't stand out! The focus is your character but she doesn't really stand out because of those bright strong blue background.

BoredCraft responds:

Thank you for feedback.
In this one i tried to use mixer brush on the layers which had sharp shade(for start) and followed by "smoothing" the edge`s shader with mixer brush, but it ended up to not blend so well, almost not at all the shadows levels.
And i know the shaodw from her hair is chaotic, but i was trying to us there again mixer brush but whit the inverse mask of layer. I mean the white part of the mask was everywhere , less on the hair, and with mixer brush i dragged de white part on the hair. A little lazy tehnique to make shadow, but i need god tier practice to reach the High quality shdows.
The background can be resolved. To bring depth of field feel, no?
Now i will analyse with another eye what i draw.

[Rockstars]

...imagine doing THAT on stage... at the end of the song or as the grand finale.

KonanSaurus responds:

10/10!!

[Artii]

She looks like Midna.

Dakzky responds:

Now that i think about it. Yeah she do resembles Midna :3