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Hmm... Since you have a light source right in front of the character I'd say you need very dark shadows, and highlights.

Looks like you had trouble here with the hands... figures; those trouble me as well.
Little trick I do... the palm of the hand is a rectangle, the fingers, aside from the thumb, I "carve out" of another rectangle or half-moon shape.

Lastly... I think some line variations is needed here: Thick Lines for the overall outline, medium lines for the big details, and thin lines for the little details such as the embroideries.

Thetageist responds:

You nailed the three things I find hardest to do. Directional lighting, hands, and drawing with tiny brushes.

At first glance this doesn't look too bad...
On second glance there's a bunch of stuff that needs correcting/improving.

First things first... if you color your artworks; keep the lineart and the colors on separate layers, keep the lineart on top and set it to "multiply" or whatever equivalent your art program has.

That way you won't get those ugly white borderlines.

Speaking of lines... for the... guitar strings you should have used a line tool to ensure that the lines would be straight.

The eyebrows could be thicker.

Some small but necessary details are missing; the strap of the guitar/banjo, the left thumb

Nice to see these guys again... shame that they kinda just "vanished..."

Talk about cheating...

I think this artwork here could use more contrast between the characters and the background; the characters don't quite stand out properly.

The lineart could use some variation... other than that I find it odd that your character has irises that have no color.

Overall your alien looks fine... the only thing that bothers me a little that he's missing a little something special... something that makes him truly recognizable and let's him stand out among other alien characters.

Vhlem responds:

Thanks for the feedback, I’ll keep that in mind for the future

Umbreon and Espeon as your starters... sounds like the best Pokemon Game ever to me!

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I'm a jack-of-all-trades kind of artist; I emulate other artist's art-styles and make fanart.
I was also a hobby writer on AO3 and fanfiction.

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